又到了一周一次的雅思热搜播报,据说这次听力S3是1.5倍速播放的,声音都变尖了?
我们先一起来看看2019年4月13容的雅思写作解析及范文!由上海朗阁教育写作老师余曰简*~~
04-13双边讨论类大作文社会话题-明星和慈善
Somepeoplebelievethatfamouspeople'ssupporttowardsinternationalaidorganizationsdrawstheattentiontoproblems,whileothersthinkcelebritiesmaketheproblemslessimportant.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
题目大意:
有人说名人支持慈善能吸引社会关注,其他人说名人反而减少慈善问题的关注度。双边讨论并提出你的立场。
思路:
双边讨论题目,挑选一边我比较有内容阐述的来支持。我会选择名人对慈善事业的正面效应,相对内容会比较多。在内容阐述方面关于名人的负面效应,比较容易的想到的观点就是明星会有负面新闻,从而影响他们代言的活动。而对于明星对于慈善的正面效应,往往就是他们的粉丝影响力,另外一个近期正好还有一个很应景的素材。就是热映的《波西米亚狂想曲》,结尾高潮的liveaid演唱会,就是明星慈善*好的一个例子。
审题,找出关键词:
drawstheattention:吸引公众注意力(找出明星的好处,如何吸引公众的关注,*直接的就是明星的粉丝效应,这里不仅仅限于对于普通人,还可以延伸到明星对于一些政要和富翁的影响力)
maketheproblemslessimportant:减少公众的关注(找出明星的坏处,如何导致公众的冷漠,明星的坏处比较常见的就是负面新闻,引起大众反感)
提纲梳理如下:
范文:
Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhethercelebritiesisbeneficialtothespreadofcharityactivities.Inmyview,theinfluenceoffamousfiguresisconducivetoincreasethesenseofsocialresponsibilityamongstthegeneralpublic.
Ontheonehand,itiseasytounderstandwhysomepeoplearecriticalofthenegativeeffectsbroughtbysomecelebritiestocharitableorganizations.Intheeyesofthosecritics,theimageofmanymovieandpopstarsisusuallyboundupwithextravagantlifestylefeaturingluxuriousdressesandcars,ifnotnegativenewspertainingdrugabuseortaxevasion.Consideringthis,itseemsabsurdtoinvolvethosefromvanityfairinthesocialservicefordisadvantagedgroups,whichmightdisgustthemajorityandthereforedeterthepublicfromparticipatingintheactivity.
Ontheotherhand,Itendtostandbythosewhoattachmoreimportanceonthepositivesideofpublicicons,whohavethemagictoattracttheyoungergenerationandevenpoliticianstojoinphilanthropy.OneconvincingexamplewecannotaffordtoforgetistheLiveAidConcertin1985,whichraisedmillionsofdollarsforthefamineinAfrica.Haditnotbeenforthosesuperpopandrockstars,theproblemwouldhaveneverbeenrealizedbytheworld,andthousandsofpeoplewouldhavediedofhungeranddiseases.Whatismoreimportant,itisundertheappealofthosefamousmusiciansthatdevelopedeconomiesagreetoslashthedebtownedbythoseAfricancountries.
Regardlessofthetruththatthereisadarksidehiddenbehindmanystars,Iwouldsaythatthosecelebrities,withtheiruniquecharisma,dohavetheirroletoplayinarousingpeople’sawarenessofcharity.
相关词汇:
Conducive 有利的
Socialresponsibility 社会责任
charitableorganizations 慈善机构
boundupwith 相关联
pertain 同…相关
Extravagant *的
drugabuse滥用毒品
taxevasion 逃税
vanityfair 名利场
disadvantagedgroups弱势群体
disgust 令人生厌
philanthropy 慈善事业
developedeconomies 发达国家
slashthedebt 免除债务
charisma 吸引力
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Ontheotherhand,itiseasytounderstandwhy…
Ontheotherhand,Itendtostandbythosewho…
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