4月27日雅思写作思路解析（附7分范文）

2022-07-23 07:00:49

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作者：朗阁小编

4月*后一场雅思考试结束啦，雅思官方出的写作题，是想要蹭一下巴黎圣母院的热点么？跟随上海朗阁教育余曰简老师来看看这次的题目、范文和解析吧！ 04-27混合类题型–社会话题 Somepeoplethinkcertainoldbuildingsareworthpreservingmorethantheotherones.Whichty

4月*后一场雅思考试结束啦，雅思官方出的写作题，是想要蹭一下巴黎圣母院的热点么？跟随上海朗阁教育余曰简老师来看看这次的题目、范文和解析吧！

04-27混合类题型–社会话题

Somepeoplethinkcertainoldbuildingsareworthpreservingmorethantheotherones.Whichtypesofoldbuildingsshouldbepreserved？Doyouthinktheadvantagesofpreservingoldbuildingsoutweighthedisadvantages？

题目大意：

有观点认为有的老房子比其他老房子更值得*护。请问是哪些老房子值得*护？*护老房子的利弊？

思路：

题目有两个写作任务，逐一回应。哪些老房子值得*护，*护老房子的利弊。在解释第利弊的时候，题目所问的老房子是一个模糊概念，解释的时候要对利和弊所讨论的对象，予以明确细分，*护具体的哪些老房子有利，哪些有弊。这样解释，才是对文章前一个内容，即哪些老房子值得*护给出了站得住脚的理由。

审题，找出关键词：

Whichtypes：哪些老房子值得*护（需给出明确细分）

theadvantagesofpreservingoldbuildingsoutweighthedisadvantages：*护老建筑的利弊（老建筑是个抽象词，需要对老建筑具体化分类后才能讨论利弊，如历史建筑，和没有历史价值的危房）

提纲梳理如下：

范文：

Thepreservationofoldbuildingsisoneofthemajorconcernsinthemodernera,withthecontroversyaboutwhichtypesofconstructionsdeservetobeprotected.Tome,itisthosewithhistoricalandculturalbackgroundthatneedpreserving,giventheirreturnineconomicandstudyperspectives.

Whenitcomestotheprosandconsofprotectingoldbuildings,Iwouldsaythatitdependsonwhattypesofstructureswearetalkingabout.Forthosedilapidatedoneswithouthistoricalvalue,Idonotseeanygoodreasonstomaintainthem.Rather,itisawasteofbothtaxpayers’moneyandthescarcelandresourceinbigcities.Whatismoreworryingisthepotentialriskstothesafetyofpeoplewholiveinside,consideringthefactthatmostelectricandheatingsystemsinthosedwellingshaveexceededtheirdesignlife.

Nevertheless,thosewithhistoricalandartisticvaluesareworthpreservingintermsoftheiroverwhelmingadvantages.Firstly,theyareofparamountimportanceintheacademicstudyofarchitecture,asmanyofthesestructuresrepresentthecertainarchitecturaldesign,genreandconstructiontechnicsofaperiod.Anotherkeybenefitwecannotaffordtoignoreistheeconomicrewards.Thesebuildingsareusuallyreckonedaslandmarksofaplace,whichattractmillionsofvisitorseveryyear.Bymaintainingthem,notonlydoesthegovernmentmakeenormousprofitsintourismincome,butalsowillcreatemorejobopportunitieswiththeboomingtourism,say,tourguides,hotels,restaurants,andtaxidrivers.

Inconclusion,itseemstomethatitisthosehistoricalbuildingsthatdeserveourconservation,astheirbenefitsineconomyandstudyfaroutweighthecostofprotection.

相关词汇：

Preservation*护

prosandcons 利弊

dilapidated 破旧的

paramount 极重要的

architecture 建筑

genre 风格

landmark 地标

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