5月11日雅思写作“灭霸题”思路解析

2022-07-19 18:37:02

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作者：朗阁小编

　　据说5月11日的雅思考试比较友好，那大家觉得如何呢~？不过这次雅思写作是“灭霸题”，跟随上海朗阁教育余曰简老师一起来看看写作题目、范文和解析吧！　　05-11 观点类题型 – 社会话题　　Most of world’s problems are caused by over-population. To what ext

　　据说5月11日的雅思考试比较友好，那大家觉得如何呢~？不过这次雅思写作是“灭霸题”，跟随上海朗阁教育余曰简老师一起来看看写作题目、范文和解析吧！

　　05-11 观点类题型 – 社会话题

　　Most of world’s problems are caused by over-population. To what extent do you agree ordisagree?

　　题目大意：

　　*上多数问题是由人口过剩造成的。同意或反对？

　　思路：

　　同意反对类的题目，一般有是三种回答。1）完全同意；2）完全反对；3）折中（部分同意和反对）。我们一般是建议同学采用折中的策略，这样正文的主体段可以采用双边讨论，写作的内容选择就更多；

　　题目所给出的观点，其表述一般都是抽象和较模糊的，就是需要你通过细化，将一个抽象的概念区分为一个个具体的问题予以区别讨论。也就是我们常说的具体问题具体分析。

　　这道题的抽象词是mostof the world’s problems, 暗示了几个槽点：是否所有问题都是人口过剩造成的？还有哪些问题不是这个原因导致的？以及真正的原因是什么？

　　审题，找出关键词：

　　Mostof world’s problems：抽象表述，要予以具体化，即具体是哪些问题是人口过剩导致？对不是有人口导致的问题，其真是原因又是什么？

　　提纲梳理如下：

　　范文

　　Some people may argue that the surplus of population is the causation of most problems the world over. While it may be the case in some countries, I would say that over-population should not be culpable for all the difficulties we have, while some underlying reasons need to be explored.

　　On the one hand, it is understandable why many people see the population growth as the answer to many problems. In metropolitan cities, tons of waste, whether these be packages of products, plastic bags,defective or outdated electronic gadgets, result in the enormous pollution tothe environment, as most of which are non-biodegradable and will stay in the landfills for hundreds of years to come. Another problem that irritates every urban inhabitant is the traffic congestion, which is an inevitable problem that can be attributed to the high density of population.

　　On the other hand, the increasing population should not be reckoned as the only culprit for all problems, while there may be other fundamental factors. One issue we should not forget is that in many countries, what the government faces is the insufficient workforce due to lower population. Canada, for example, is one of those countries that are frustrated with the lack of residents. Even in those so-called over-populated countries, if we move attention from those crowded urban cities to rural areas, the striking fact is the spare farmland due to the loss of labor force, given that the youth all move to cities in search of better opportunities in education, work and medical care. In other words, what is behind the population increase is its distribution, which is usually the result of imbalance of development and resources between the urban and the rural area.

　　In conclusion, although the population growth does contribute to many problems in cities, I would say that the essence of the problem is how governments institute policy to allocate the resources to facilitate the reasonable distribution of population.

　　相关词汇：

　　Causation 原因

　　Beculpable for 对负责

　　Defective 损坏的

　　Non-biodegradable 不降解的

　　Gadget 小电器

　　Irritate 令人恼怒

　　Beattributed to 归咎于

　　Culprit 罪魁祸首

　　Fundamental 根本的

　　Insufficient 不足

　　Befrustrated with 受困扰