己的人生，应该谁说了算？| 托福线下写作考情分析

2021-08-04 13:47:00

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作者：朗阁小编

这道题重复了2020.12月第5周的的家考题目。家庭教育类话题，容易想到论点和展开细节；题目理解：题目*句话：“Parents today spend too much time ....”是事实背景，引出题目。第二句话: “children should be allowed to make their own choices. ” 是我们需要论证的题目。

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题目

Trying to help determine the futures of their children; children should be allowed to make their own choices.

审题分析

1. 这道题重复了2020.12月第5周的的家考题目。

2. 这道题难度系数：???????? 家庭教育类话题，容易想到论点和展开细节。

3. 题目理解：题目*句话：“Parents today spend too much time ....”是事实背景，引出题目。第二句话: “children should be allowed to make their own choices. ” 是我们需要论证的题目。

4. 总观点选择：

*种：同意。*们应该被允许自己做决定，而不是父母帮助他们做关于未来的决定。

第二种：不同意。*们不应该自己做决定，应该让父母帮他们做决定。

参考提纲

总观点：*们应该被允许做自己的选择。

中间段1：Admittedly, children do not have enough intellectual and emotional maturity to make every accurate decision…..However, ….

中间段2： What they choose by themselves is more likely to accommodate their original intention and benefit their future development. Take extra-curricular activities for instance.

中间段3：允许他们做决定有利于他们的独立。即使做错了，Drawing on the experience that they made mistakes in the past is an indispensable element of psychological maturity of a child, which in turn motivates them to rethink their past frequently and eventually overcome formidable adversity independently.

(其他可行的中间段：父母这样做也有利于establish equal and harmonious relationship with children. 否则*们就觉得是被强迫去做父母安排好的事情，即使是正确的，他们也觉得不被尊重。然后不愿意跟父母沟通...

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