2021-08-04 13:14:48
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作者：朗阁小编
今天的题目重复的是2013年的老题。看来ETS真的没题了…. 2. 其次，这道题目也有一定的难度。符合老师在写作团里给大家强调的：题目的审题难度在*。尤其是如果题目包含了多个句子，一定要先确定是否都是题目，都要回应。 3. 题目有2句话，属于同一个立场的正反两面。但是不完全一样， 第1句话从正面说，it is important to make sure others know … 第2句话从反面说，if not, you will never be successful，很*。 都 今天推送的是2.27日线下托福考题分析
综合写作回忆
阅读：
讲作者认为一幅画是达芬奇画的
1颜料是达芬奇首先用的
2这个画布很有年代了
3上面有达芬奇的手指印（有些信息点感觉没记全 大致这个意思）
听力反驳：
1 上面应该有tiny cracks 但是这个画很smooth 所以应该是recent year 画的
2画布很旧不代表画很旧 近代画家也喜欢用old material画画 而且资料显示达芬奇不喜欢用这玩意画画
3这个print在surface上（？这里我有点没听清）而且不clear 所以只能说similar 达芬奇 不能说就是他的手指印
独立写作分析
It is important to make sure that others（influential people or potential employers know）about your strengths and accomplishments; if not, you will be never successful in life.
1. 今天的题目重复的是2013年的老题。看来ETS真的没题了….
2. 其次，这道题目也有一定的难度。符合老师在写作团里给大家强调的：题目的审题难度在*。尤其是如果题目包含了多个句子，一定要先确定是否都是题目，都要回应。
3. 题目有2句话，属于同一个立场的正反两面。但是不完全一样，
第1句话从正面说，it is important to make sure others know …
第2句话从反面说，if not, you will never be successful，很*。
都是明显的controversial issue, 所以都需要回应。
4 *句话：利弊题型。回应这种做的好or 坏结果，尤其是针对success.
可行的分论点：
好处： ①让别人知道了可以帮助自己获得更多机会。比如就业，比如晋升，比如推荐信……. ②扩展朋友圈，交到更多的朋友。因为人们对喜欢跟*的，自己欣赏的人交朋友。
坏处：比较浪费时间，影响自己对工作学习的注意力。
第二句话: 含有never的*题。
推荐，反驳never
--即使influential people 不知道自己的成就，也可以成功。比如，乔布斯在刚创业的时候，并没有人知道他是谁，也不看好他的公司。但是他设计的iMac个人电脑和iPhone*获得了全球消费者的喜爱，成为*上*成功的商人。
参考提纲：
总观点：I disagree with the statement.
中间段1：Admittedly, making influential people know our strengths facilitate our way to success. A renowned professor may write a convincing recommendation letter for us, potential employers may offer us the dream job we long for a long time, and the superior can allocate us tasks in line with our speciality. However, it does not necessarily mean their familiarity with our accomplishments is indispensable; without it, we still can make it.
中间段2: Making our accomplishments known to important persons often wastes a lot of time which could be devoted to improving ourselves. For a young salesman, he may have to wait outside of his boss’ office for a whole day to get a five-minute meeting. Before he can brief his sales performances, his college may have come up with a new marketing strategy and have achieved better results. At the end of the day, his low-key college instead of him is more likely to get promotion.
中间段3: Even though people are nobodies, they still can achieve what they want. Take Steve Jobs for example. After he dropped out of Reed College, he cofounded the Apple Company with his classmate in his fathers’ garage. He had no connections with big names back then. However, because the sleek design and powerful function of iMac he designed(写作团day15范例), the first generation of personal computers hit the global market successfully.
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