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雅思作文只有5分？复杂句不熟练的锅 5分作文常见的错误，如果你有6分的就不要看了。有一个考生在写雅思作文中经常犯的错误，那就是大家喜欢写复杂句，可是！复杂句里面的从句或者主句经常缺了主谓宾。
请看一下下面的几个句子：
(1)It should be considered that the diverse hobbies they have respectively.
(2) As to society, inputting fast-food and become popular have direct and indirect influence on the country which reflect an impact of unique traditional culture.
(3) Each major enrolls different gender people is depends on students’ performances and integrative abilities, rather than rely on several impractical criteria.
*个句子：that后面的句子不完整。
首先，it should be considered that句型that后面的内容就是it所指代的内容，而that后面接的就是一个句子，这两个语法知识点，大家要先知道。再看看这个句子，that后面的the diverse hobbies they have respectively，只是一个用定语后置的词，不是句子。
应该改成：It should be considered that people have diverse hobbies.或者
The diverse hobbies people have respectively should be considered.
第二个句子：主语不完整。这个句子是写得有点够烂的，大家是不是都看到好几处错误，可是开头的主语就已经开始犯错了，这个考生是想动名词当主语。
所以应该改成：Inputting the popularized fast food has direct and indirect influence on a country, which reflects an impact of unique traditional culture.
第三个句子：是不是也是狗屁不通？这个句子有两个动词，enroll和depend on，需要去掉其中一个。
改成：That each major enrolls people of different genders depends on students’ performances and integrative abilities. 改成用that引导的主语从句。
总的来说就是，你没写完一个句子是不是主谓宾三者都写齐了，是否多写，或者漏写。
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